Well, I couldn't figure out how to put more pages on under the headings "My Stories", so I decided that I would just start one of my stories here. Those interested could read and those who aren't can ignore it. It is a sci fi story in 4 parts.
Here is Whisperings Part One:
copyright 2000
Whisperings
by Rian
* the watcher (Part One)
Upon waking, Zoe stretched her long lean body
and smiled. She had slept well despite the concern she had felt upon
leaving the theater the night before. Thinking she was being followed,
she had given in to fear and had run the last few feet to her car - heart
thumping and mace in hand. However, upon arriving home safe and sound,
she had later berated herself for her actions. All her life she had been
plagued by a strange feeling of being watched
and voices that whispered. Her
adopted family had convinced her as a child that she simply had an overactive
imagination that needed to be held in check.
'A brief moment of paranoia', she decided this
morning and let the matter drop as she swung her long bare legs over the side
of the bed and tottered off to the small kitchenette where she fumbled with
coffee beans and a grinder. She told herself that one day she would be in
a position to buy one of those wonderful new coffee makers that not only grind
your coffee, but brew it as well. Wasn't technology wonderful - just a
mite too expensive for someone who was 'between jobs' at the moment.
Then slipping onto the small patio that nestled outside
her one room apartment, Zoe settled into a canvas lounge chair holding her
steaming cup and watching two other very early birds in the tree across the
way. It was barely light, but it looked to her that the larger bird was
feeding the smaller. 'How sweet', she thought. The cool breeze
caught her bare feet and ran up the loose cotton t-shirt she slept in. It
felt fabulous.
It was Sunday so no need to rush about. She
could just 'be'. It would be necessary to continue the search for new
employment on Monday, but for some mysterious reason, Zoe was
unconcerned. Something would turn up, and in the meantime she was feeling
very mellow. She had long since given up on going to Sunday services. She
did go sometimes during the week when the congregation was small and the gathering more
intimate. But on Sundays, she sat alone with God in her small garden - or
so she thought.
Actually someone
did sit with her there - but Zoe was not always aware of it. Sometimes
she felt a prickly sensation on the back of her neck when the watcher moved too close. Generally he walked freely about
the small garden, taking care not to venture within "her space" -
unless it was necessary. Zoe was his project, but more than that, she was
"important", more important than anyone could imagine.
Out of nowhere an orange blur leaped out of the
bushes and onto Zoe's lap. On instinct the watcher moved closer as a cry
of helplessness escaped his charge.
"Oh, Chester - look what you've done, you
made me spill coffee everywhere! And look at you, you've been rolling in
the bushes again. You're covered with leaves and dirt."
The Chester cat purred at the sound and touch of
his mistress' sweet voice and tender hands, but soon sensed something else close by.
Arching his back, hissing, and letting out a strange catawalling sound, he
bounded off Zoe's lap and disappeared through the open kitchen door.
"You are one strange cat, Chester",
Zoe said aloud at the retreating feline, "Lucky for you that I love
you so much."
Laughing at herself, she disengaged her long
legs that she had tucked under her lotus fashion - a habit learned in Yoga
class years ago - and proceeded to remove the coffee stained t-shirt as she
re-entered her apartment.
Returning moments later,
this time in jeans and a blue loose-fitting sweater, she poured herself another
cup, switched off the brewer, and headed for the front door. Staring for
a moment at her reflection in the hall mirror - pale delicate skin (almost
translucent), light golden hair pulled back loosely with a rubber band, and
large piercing blue-grey eyes that someone once called eerie - she wondered
about her own biological mother. Did she resemble her? Would she ever know?
Unlocking the dead bolt, she opened the door
carefully and glanced down the long corridor. It was empty. Sunday mornings people
tended to sleep in, and she saw no sign of her imaginary stalker from the night
before. Shaking her head as if to clear it form even venturing down that
lane of thought, Zoe reached down and picked up the morning paper.
That's when she saw it! Something moved in the shadows down the
hall. A flicker of "something", then gone. My imagination
again, she reflected, always working overtime. Closing the front door
behind her and replacing the dead bolt, she began to peruse the front page in
silence. But - somewhere someone was whispering .... Standing perfectly
still, paper and coffee in hand, Zoe cocked her head and listened:
"We're
waiting... we're waiting... we're waiting..."
"Who's waiting?", Zoe said
aloud. "Who are you?" she almost shouted, "Am I going
crazy?"
"Listen
with your heart... listen... listen...", the whispers continued.
Zoe listened. She thought she heard a cry - a
tiny far off cry. Putting down the coffee cup and newspaper, she hurried back
to the door, unlocked it, and pulled it open again. Now she heard it
clearly. It sounded almost like... a kitten?
Moving slowly, cautiously down the darkened
hallway, Zoe ventured towards the sound. She was about to reach the
corner where she had previously thought she had seen movement when the door she
was passing suddenly burst open.
Zoe screamed!
"My god! You gave me a start",
exclaimed the sparsely clad young man in the open doorway. "It isn't every day I find a
girl on my doorstep... and a screaming one at that. Are you
alright?" His accent was British and his concern seemed real.
"I'm Noah... ", he began.
But Zoe didn't respond. She was staring at
something in the shadows. Staring and pointing....
"I say, what is that?" the tousled haired Englishman asked, seeing movement without shape in the corner. "I'm sorry,
but without my glasses...", he began.
As Zoe moved nearer, she startled, then quickly
ran forward and leaned down.
"What is
it?" repeated the near-sighted stranger.
Reaching out a hand, she uncovered the quivering
bundle. "Oh my God, she cried, it's a baby!"
The
watcher smiled.
(to be continued tomorrow)
Wow, aren't you full of surprises! I enjoyed Part 1 Rian, looking forward to Part 2 and learning more about this Watcher...
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Dug. I have so many stories I've written over the years... and they may not appeal to some and certainly may not be great stories, but it's so much fun to write them and see where the characters take me. This one I had fun writing and couldn't for the longest decide if I wanted to continue it or end it where I did. If it went on, I'm afraid knowing people are what they are, the story would probably get dark...
DeleteOboy! What a great start, Rian. I am already hooked and looking forward to more. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, DJan. It's a fun piece. Enjoyed writing it and if others enjoy reading it, that's a good feeling.
DeleteSee the "Home" bar up there. Every page title goes on a tab in the bar. "Home" is a tab. It's in set up. Google has explanations.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Joanne. I do see the Home bar and have tried to click on it and add "My Stories", but somehow, nothing happens. I will try again after I post the rest of this story...
DeleteSpooky but maybe not. Thinking the watcher is not evil but protective. Now I can't wait to find out more plus the who and what about the baby.
ReplyDeletePatti, it may be a little spooky, but not dark.
DeleteYou are a super writer! I am on the edge of my seat!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Miss Merry. You are kind.
DeleteOoooh. DEFINITELY looking forward to Part Two. And Three and Four.
ReplyDeleteThanks, EC, hope it lives up to your expectations.
DeleteWhoa....intriguing. Making us all want more.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used a play on words with caterwauling...using your chosen spelling.
Anni, it's not a long story... but it was an intriguing one to write. It could go past Part Four, but not sure I want it to.
DeleteWoW!!! you write beautifully. sic-fi is not generally my thing, but i enjoyed this!!
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